Satin Silk 459

The story could be read for others for free and I might get some feedback. Though he did suggest I convert to Times New Roman font. I thanked him for his suggestions and made the font change. I didn't even mind the implied criticism.I posted the story, it was a little out of place because the site specializes in erotica, but they allowed about anything legal to be posted.It was up for less than eight hours and I started getting emails. Most were complimentary but several with some sincere criticism. I went back and did a thorough spell and punctuation check, and fixed some run on sentences, also paragraphs were too long. One person pointed out that I was being unrealistic on how long I was having my character hit a golf ball, the story was a fantasy but hey he was right about it being unrealistic, and he had brought it up politely so no reason not to make a change. After making those corrections I reposted the story awaiting further comments and hoping for a few compliments.There. I would meet them , bring photos of my wife , most of them very explicit and sorted through the applicants until I found guys with a fetish for good looking petite women who had heavy bushes . Long story short I would take my wife to a small out of the way biker bar where she wouldn't be recognized and would get her very drunk . We would dance until 2 a.m. , have a great time , sample herbs on the way home and then strip down and head to our bedroom . What she didn't realize while she was sucking and fucking and allowing me to spread her cunt wide open in front of the window is that the guy she danced with once or twice at the bar was outside the window watching , standing on a specially built platform that elevated him to be able to see everything . I would arrange to meet the different men at the bar , they would be introduced to my wife as business associates , sit with us , talk and ask my wife to dance , then they would follow us home and take up their place outside our window ..
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